Looking for feedback on my campaign

[Vague Sage]

Hey everyone!

This is my second Campaign that I am running on Kickstarter (the first one failed) and I am looking for some constructive feedback this time to increase my chances of success. It felt like I was doing well in the very beginning and then it hit a real plateau. Looking for Jedi masters to show me the way. Please see the campaign here. Thanks in advance for see what I might be doing wrong or what I need to add.

Please find the project here: http://kck.st/1WCgkpG

Thanks!

[Vague Sage]

Is anyone here...?

[Iwin]

Personal I was put off after watching the video. Maybe an the creature talking about the project with a few pictures from the game had been better?