I'm launching my first Kickstarter in a few days and would love to hear opinions of my page. I've been cross-eyed doing the Video and Page graphics for the past week and need a fresh pair of eyes to take a look. Thank you!
Here is the link:
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/20 ... n=190c88c1
My Kickstarter Page - I need a second pair of eyes.
Nice product!
Check ordering of your items on the page - describe it first, assert works in drawers second, ask for social media support last after you describe things. Looks like you were making sure you responded to all comments but ignored the flow of things for a potential backer seeing this for the first time.
Check spelling and grammar - put your copy through spell check - in odd places, not is odd places, and so on. Not sure everybody will get the thermo reference either - how about something a little more common?
Love the gifs showing how things work - very well done.
Minor criticism of the video - a bit long, a few too many 'bad' examples. Mostly funny, but got monotonous after a while. Started critiquing the gags instead of the product. Trim video down a bit by using just your very best bad examples and keep up the focus on the wow factor of the product.
Check ordering of your items on the page - describe it first, assert works in drawers second, ask for social media support last after you describe things. Looks like you were making sure you responded to all comments but ignored the flow of things for a potential backer seeing this for the first time.
Check spelling and grammar - put your copy through spell check - in odd places, not is odd places, and so on. Not sure everybody will get the thermo reference either - how about something a little more common?
Love the gifs showing how things work - very well done.
Minor criticism of the video - a bit long, a few too many 'bad' examples. Mostly funny, but got monotonous after a while. Started critiquing the gags instead of the product. Trim video down a bit by using just your very best bad examples and keep up the focus on the wow factor of the product.
--- Tom
Thank you mdtommyd! I've made some changes based on your feedback.
We're now live:
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/20 ... loset-dres
We're now live:
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/20 ... loset-dres